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Lazy idiot
Ooh...that would be a funny rec. For someone he's never met IRL. For all he knows I could be a 480# man named Hank! k
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Another question...would it be out of place to include in the cover letter that the driving distance is not of concern to me, as my spouse and son are already in that same town every weekday for school and work and that I am familiar with the area, as we lived there for 5 years (and I would kill to move back).
madness baby
K, it sounds like it would be a great job for you! I would say that the paragraph about your fitness experience should go earlier 'cause it's so impressive. I would put it above the "since. . ." paragraph. I think it's the most relevant to the job and shows your commitment. I'm sitting at home crafting cover letters myself tonight. The job search for next year is already on! Keep us posted on how it goes. Good luck!
I am applying for a job at a new fitness club down near did's work (and Dane's school...I'm determined we will live down that way, again). The resume is the relatively easy part...here's my ROUGH cover letter. I'd appreicate any feedback: ~~~~~ September 15, 2007 To Whom it May Concern: The accompanying resumé is in response to your job listing in the Muskegon Chronicle for a Customer Service Representative. As my credentials show, I have previous experience in several positions that require considerable rapport with the public. I am particularly interested in this position as it coordinates well with my personal interests. My related work experiences, combined with my enjoyment of physical fitness and ability to work with people of all ages and backgrounds would prepare me well to work with the public in a health club environment. Since earning my second BA I have spent the past 6 years at home raising my son. In my spare time, I've enjoyed working independently as a candid portrait photographer and conducting in-home parties with The Body Shop at Home. In the past few years I have lost 50 lbs and nearly 18 months ago I rediscovered running and have since trained for and competed in an average of 6 races per year in distances from 5k to 25k, with the goal of running a full marathon in 2008. In addition to running I also enjoy working out at home using free weights, so I am no stranger to the benefits of excercise for weight loss and overall physical fitness. I'm confident that my academic and employment background, solid work ethic, enjoyment of regular exercise, and outgoing personality make me a well-rounded candidate for this position. I look forward to discussing your needs and my qualifications in more detail. Thank you in advance for your consideration. Sincerely, Kirsten .....
Sounds good Kirsten! I would also substitute for the word "parties". I wouldn't eliminate the 4th paragraph, but would the specific race lengths along with your goal. So maybe something like "In the past few years I have successfully lost 50 lbs and 18 months ago I rediscovered running and have competed in several races per year. In addition to running I also enjoy working out at home using free weights, so I am no stranger to the benefits of excercise for weight loss and overall physical fitness." Since this is a health club you're applying for (thinking front desk?), I'd switch the 3rd and 4th paragraphs. Good luck! This would be so much fun. I loved it when I worked at a local health/ racquetball club. The best part was being able to use the club!!
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